First song recorded and 4 months review (in Russian + translation added)

Kasumi

Hi everyone, my name is Viktoria and I'm from Russia
I've been doing the course for 5 months now, but the song was recorded 4 months after my start on program with Volume 1.
Having high and light voice all my life, training the chest register was and still is the hardest part for me, at first I barely could reach A4 with chest voice, I'm not even speaking about holding this note. So I worked hard and at some point I felt that I'm ready to record my first ever song in the studio. And now I want to share it with you and I'd really appreciate your feedbacks.
And I can assure you all who's still hesitating, that the course works!

Thank you!

Here is the song (it isn't a cover and I sing in Russian)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eocg6Fd_n_c

highmtn

Amazing recording, captivating video! Wishing you much success, Viktoria!

Kasumi

@highmtn thank you very much!

Wigs

You are doing great! I like this melodic metal kind of music. I'm keen to hear more 🙂

Kasumi

@Wigs thanks a lot! we have actually one more song released called Shelter, it's on the band's channel, our guitar player sings there. And we're planning to release 2 new songs from this album soon we're working on our songs together with guitar player from Spain, just the two of us

maximgottmer

Great work Kasumi. Good luck.

shining

This is really good stuff. I like it even though its in russian and I don´t understand a word.
Wish you best of luck!!!

Kasumi

@maximgottmer , @shining thank you very much!

@shining I'm planning on adding translation of the song on the next week

Kasumi

Here's the translation

1st verse
The weirdo walks
In the desert of sleep
He refused his life
In the name of good
In his eyes
Is just a flock of birds
They are dead
And they can't be brought to life

Chorus
You
Won't save our souls
We now have only one fate
But
You will not bring them back to life
They're in the desert of sleep

2nd verse
The weirdo walks
In the desert of sleep
But darkness is close
And she's beyond his control
"Always move forward"
His motto was
He must live
How once they've lived

Chorus
You
Won't save our souls
We are the masters of our fate
But
You will not bring them back to life
They're only echoes of emptiness

Kevin123

Very nice, Viktoria!

Kasumi

@Kevin123 thank you!

Bobby5404

This was a very mesmerizing song. You have a beautiful voice and I am impressed at what you have accomplished in such a short time. Keep up the great work!