Original Song - Unclean

Mike86

Would love to hear your thoughts.

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Wigs

For the vocals there are a few things you can do to bring out your best. you use alot of air which is fine stylistically but even so I think you can still achieve a safer breathy sound and still not use so much. You could probably try and use only half the amount of air and instead control it coming out to get a bit of a breathy tone instead of letting so much of it come out all at once. This will give you a bit more resonance as too. Pitch was fairly good and I like the tune as well.

Mike86

Thank-you. When playing guitar at the same time, I find I lose focus on my diaphragmatic support. I will work on this. I'm glad you dig the tune.

HumanRobot

Mike86 said:

Would love to hear your thoughts.

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/gNDpX

Hi

I loved this x really great x

Human Robotx

Mike86

Thank-you, much appreciated.

woofie

I liked the song a lot and could almost swear I was listening to Mick Jagger.

Mike86

That's very kind, thank-you - I was using Keith's open G tuning on this one!