For the vocals there are a few things you can do to bring out your best. you use alot of air which is fine stylistically but even so I think you can still achieve a safer breathy sound and still not use so much. You could probably try and use only half the amount of air and instead control it coming out to get a bit of a breathy tone instead of letting so much of it come out all at once. This will give you a bit more resonance as too. Pitch was fairly good and I like the tune as well.
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