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This is an original song by me called "Out of place"

HumanRobotHumanRobot Member Posts: 182
Hi

Let me know what you think . Unfortunatelly for me I had laryingitus lol when I sang this so my voice came out abit differently lol



Thanks

Human Robot

Comments

  • codeowlcodeowl 2.0 PRO Posts: 304
    @HumanRobot,

    Hey mate, so aside from your poor voice having laryngitis, I quite like the melody and the phrasing of the song. The keyboard was very nice, with a haunting type vibe to it. I thought it was an interesting story and quite a nice piece, very relaxing and reflective. I could picturing it being used in a movie... I can picture the scenes ... maybe as someone sits and reflects over a box of memories or something....

    Regards,

    Scotty
  • ElaraElara Moderator, 2.0 PRO, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 212
    I agree with codeowl's thoughts. :) I just wanted to add: Please do not ever sing when you have laryngitis! Singing through a cold is fine, but laryngitis necessitates vocal rest.

    I hope you are feeling better now!
  • HumanRobotHumanRobot Member Posts: 182
    Elara said:

    I agree with codeowl's thoughts. :) I just wanted to add: Please do not ever sing when you have laryngitis! Singing through a cold is fine, but laryngitis necessitates vocal rest.

    I hope you are feeling better now!

    Hi

    Thank you for your comment.s The thing is I often just sit down at the piano -this song just came out and I had larygitus and just played the song whilst I was poorly and recorded it -at some stage I will sit down at the piano and record it again but I didn't want to loose the tune lol.

    But yes you are right I should have rested x

    Human Robot
  • HumanRobotHumanRobot Member Posts: 182
    codeowl said:

    @HumanRobot,

    Hey mate, so aside from your poor voice having laryngitis, I quite like the melody and the phrasing of the song. The keyboard was very nice, with a haunting type vibe to it. I thought it was an interesting story and quite a nice piece, very relaxing and reflective. I could picturing it being used in a movie... I can picture the scenes ... maybe as someone sits and reflects over a box of memories or something....

    Regards,

    Scotty

    HI Scotty

    Thank you for your comments - I will at some stage re=record it - It will be interesting to see how my voice differs without having larygitus lol.

    But thanks so much again

    Human Robot
  • Klaus_TKlaus_T Moderator, 2.0 PRO Posts: 1,899
    great work, you always have a unique vibe to your songs.

    +1 for what @Elara said about resting next time, but also great you could capture this moment
  • HumanRobotHumanRobot Member Posts: 182
    Klaus_T said:

    great work, you always have a unique vibe to your songs.

    +1 for what @Elara said about resting next time, but also great you could capture this moment

    HI Klaus

    Thank you for your kind comments..

    HUman Robot


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