Your voice sounds very light and remote. I think we've talked about increasing your support in the past.
Increasing your support will put your voice more in the here and now, under more control and command.
Also you seem a bit distracted by the guitar playing. You need to concentrate on your vocals, so a karaoke version would serve you better for purposes of improving your voice and getting feedback on your voice.
Support, support, support. Just about everyone here is tired of me saying that, but I wouldn't have to say it if everyone supported their voice like they need to. When we get support taken care of we can delve into splitting finer hairs.
Keep on singing! I like your spirit!
also just out of curiosity do u think i'm more of a baritone or a tenor, its just that ive never really been sure..
hey can someone give me some feedback. it would really be appreciated!
Yes, the second version sounds more solid. It's still pitchy, but not as much as the previous version.
Your voice sounds more tenor than baritone to me.