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Pearl Jam cover- Better Man

Michael4000Michael4000 STREAMING PRO Posts: 1,028
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Hi Everyone, can you please give me some feedback/critique of this recording?

Thanks, Michael

--and please tag me if you want me to listen to something of yours!

https://1drv.ms/u/s!AvqpmhkVjP-MiUCHbZ1xGzfKLr_7

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  • WigsWigs Moderator, 2.0 PRO, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 5,042
    You are really getting a professional tonal quality to your voice to my ears. For this recording I could hear you weren't always staying in the breath/support. Especially in the opening phrase, but you are going from strength to strength! Kudos for sticking with it and keeping good consistency 🙂
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  • sjonrokz4usjonrokz4u 2.0 PRO Posts: 1,287
    I’m not going to critique, it sounds great but I really love the piano adaptation
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  • maximgottmermaximgottmer 2.0 PRO Posts: 313
    Man you sound great! nice bright ping in your sound. I'm impressed mate. Keep going, Maxim
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  • doc_ramadanidoc_ramadani Administrator, 2.0 PRO, Facility Management Posts: 3,978
    Hi Michael, @Michael4000

    mate, what a HUGE progress!!! I enjoy to hear that you managed to drop a lot of the weight in the higher range. You sound bright and open. I can hear that you gained a lot of control. Very good interpretation, man.

    KUDOS and 2 THUMBS UP for you hard work.

    Doc
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  • Michael4000Michael4000 STREAMING PRO Posts: 1,028
    @Wigs @sjonrokz4u @maximgottmer @doc_ramadani thank you for your feedback. This course and the forum has helped me tremendously.
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  • highmtnhighmtn Administrator, Moderator, Enrolled, Pro, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 15,047
    A couple of tips on this one, Michael:

    At 0:38 you sustain on the "r" of over. Sustain on vowels, not consonants. So sing O-vah, sustaining the AH of o-vah and just lightly touch the "r" at the very end of the note. Hint at the "r", don't "sing" an "r".

    At 2:35, "She Loves Him", I believe the high note is an F#4? On "She" the EE of She is difficult. Make it easier by modifying the EE to the "Aye-EE" as Ken calls it. So instead of "ShEEE" sing Shayeee. Make it subtle, but use your EE mod to "Aye" (like hay") and it will be easier to reach and sustain. Same thing at 2:42, with "way". Make it more like "weh" as opposed to a hard Aye.
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  • Michael4000Michael4000 STREAMING PRO Posts: 1,028
    edited February 2020
    @highmtn awesome tips thanks Bob!

    @doc_ramadani check this out What Bob wrote above
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  • Klaus_TKlaus_T Moderator, 2.0 PRO Posts: 2,492
    hi Michael, great job! when are you gonna play this live?
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  • Michael4000Michael4000 STREAMING PRO Posts: 1,028
    @Klaus_T I'm building a setlist. I'm thinking i need about 10 more months
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  • bonvie56bonvie56 2.0 PRO, 3.0 Streaming Posts: 55
    Nice job @Michael4000 !! No critique from me. Thanks for the nice performance!
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  • Michael4000Michael4000 STREAMING PRO Posts: 1,028
    @bonvie56 thanks!
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