Breakdown (Tom Petty cover)

Michael4000 · July 2020

Hi All! Can you please give me feedback on this?

Thanks, Michael

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Wigs · July 2020

Over all it's good but I'd make a few tweaks in your technique. There's a scooping raised larynx in the opening line. You do well to pare back the sound as you go into your upper register but you still hang onto too much of the pure vowel so there is a bit of strain there. For example the word break has too much on an ih sound in it up that high.

Michael4000 · July 2020

Thanks @Wigs !

Which vowel do you think I should use on the word break?

Wigs · July 2020

Check out chapter 32 volume 3 again about substitutions 😉

jmstanle · July 2020

@Michael4000 - I enjoyed it. The emotion came through for me. That is what I enjoy the most.

Michael4000 · July 2020

@Wigs @jmstanle thanks

Chris82 · July 2020

I didn't like it very much. I don't think it's your singing but the song, because I listened to the original too and didn't like that either. I do like some of Petty's songs but this isn't one of them unfortunately. I think your singing was just fine though!

Michael4000 · July 2020

@Chris82 thanks for checking it out!

Kevin123 · February 2021

Very nice, Michael. And I really liked your piano playing on this one -- very good feel.

Breakdown (Tom Petty cover)

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